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I want to destroy myself
I'm going to end it all
Life has no place for me
My world has begun to fall

I hope to destroy myself
I'm going to end it all
Heaven is not for me
The clouds have begun to fall

I wish to destroy myself
I have to end it all
Hell was made just for me
I have begun to fall

I cannot destroy myself
I cannot end it all
You have been here for me
You have to break my fall
©2004-2009 ~fumuki
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I'm hoping to move away from using the first person pronoun so much, but this was written a little while ago and I hadn't decided to move away from that yet. I think its pretty good, I tried to add in a few literary elements.

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